SAMPLES OF STRONG RESUMES AND LETTERS OF
RECOMMENDATION
The following pages contain samples of strong resumes and letters of recommendation.
these have been provided by Drew Applely of Marian College. Current psychology students
should not attempt to duplicate the accomplishments listed in these resumes and letters
because each person possesses talents and interests in uniquely different areas. However,
it is imperative for psychology majors to strive to fulfill their individual potentials in
such a manner as to be described by themselves (i.e., in resumes) and others (i.e., in
letters of recommendation) in equally impressive terms.
1. The first resume was written by Mikki Poynter for an internship as a residential
supervisor for the Center for Neuropsychological Rehabilitation. Mikki obtained this
position because of her experience with handicapped people (gained from her summer job)
and the responsibility that she had displayed in her other jobs and extracurricular
activities. Note how she stressed the responsibilities associated with each of her
previous jobs.
2. The second resume was written by Matt LaGrange to accompany his applications to
graduate school. The fact that Matt was accepted into the clinical psychology program at
St. Louis University with a substantial financial aid package testifies to the
effectiveness of this resume.
3. The letter of recommendation was written for Sarah Holmes as part of her application
for graduate school in family therapy. Notice how each of the three main points in the
letter were made possible by her willingness to work hard and show initiative.
A survey of these resumes and letters of recommendation yields the following
conclusions. Although intelligence was a significant trait in each of these students, it
was their willingness to (a) demonstrate high levels of motivation, enthusiasm,
independence, loyalty, and maturity and to (b) develop strong research, critical thinking,
communication, and interpersonal skills that made their resumes and letters of
recommendation so impressive.
MICHELLE A. POYNTER
Marian College
3200 Cold Springs Road
Indianapolis, Indiana 46222
(317) 929-0145
Objectives: Short-term --> Experience working with mentally or physically
handicapped people
Long-term ---> Graduate education resulting in a mental health career
Education: Sophomore psychology major at Marian College with a GPA of 3.28 on a
4.0 scale.
Relevant Classes: General Psychology, Statistical Methods, Abnormal Psychology,
Developmental Psychology, Experimental Psychology I, Introduction to Computers,
Introduction to Speech English Composition
Experience: May to September, 1988
Angola Community Sheltered Workshop (Angola, IN)
Responsible for training and supervising mentally and physically handicapped persons in
a factory atmosphere and assisting supervisors with daily job assembly and quality
control.
May to September, 1988
Sutton's Super Value (Hamilton, IN)
Responsible for price and merchandise information input, daily receipts, and customer
service.
May to September, 1987
Subway Sub Shop (Angola, IN)
Responsible for food preparation, maintenance, financial transactions, record-keeping.
January to September, 1986 and 1987
CTN Data (Hamilton, IN)
Responsible for physical upkeep of an eight room office complex.
May 1987 to Present
Youth for Christ / Campus Life (Great Lakes Region)
Responsible for supervising high school students on trips to Florida and Washington
D.C. and organizing meetings in the Northeast Indiana area.
Activities: Marian College Booster Club (1988 to present)
Booster Club Fund Raising Committee (1988 to present)
Intramural Softball and Volleyball (1987 and 1988)
Psychology Club (1987 to present)
Convocation Committee (1988 to present)
Campus Life / Youth for Christ (1983 to 1987)
Big Psyb to incoming freshman Psychology majors (1988 to present)
References: Available upon request
M A T T H E W V. L a G R A N G E
Marian College
3200 Cold Springs Road
Indianapolis, Indiana 46222
(317)929-0145
Objectives:
Educational: To earn a Ph.D. in clinical psychology.
Career: To teach and perform research in a university setting.
Education: Bachelor of Art, Marian College (expected June, 1989)
Major: Psychology Minor: Computer Applications
Cumulative GPA (4-point scale) = 3.78
GPA in Psychology = 3.80
GPA in Computer Applications = 4.00
GRE scores (verbal = 540, math = 700)
Honors and Organizations:
Elected to Psi Chi
Dean's List (each semester since spring 1986)
President of the Student Body
Vice President of the Student Body
Secretary of the Student Body
Student member of the American Psychological Association
Member of the Psychology Club
Member of the Judicial Panel
Member of the Conduct Appeals Panel
Research:
LaGrange, M., & Appleby, D. C. (1987, April). Effects of mood on time perception.
Paper presented at the Mid-America Undergraduate Research Conference, Evansville, IN.
LaGrange, M. V., & Appleby, D. C. (1988, April). Factors affecting academic
honesty. Paper presented at the Mid-America Undergraduate Research Conference,
Evansville, IN.
Fohl, M. M., Koebel, J. M., LaGrange, M. V., & Webb, P. M. (1988, April). A
student-produced evaluation form of teaching effectiveness. Paper presented at the
Mid-America Undergraduate Research Conference, Evansville, IN.
LaGrange, M. V., & Appleby, D. C. (1989, April). Student and faculty perception
of academic dishonesty as a function of learning or grade orientation. Paper presented
at the Mid-America Undergraduate Psychology Research Conference, Evansville, IN.
LaGrange, M. V., & Appleby, D. C. (manuscript submitted). Factors that affect
academic dishonesty in college students. College Teaching.
I served as a research assistant for Dr. Drew Appleby (1987-89).
Clinical
Experience: Residential Supervisor at the Center for Neuropsychological
Rehabilitation (1988 - 1989)
Counselor at the St. Vincents Hospital Stress Center (1989)
References: Dr. Drew Appleby Dr. Faye Plascak-Craig
| Graduate Admissions Committee
Department of Family Therapy
University of Connecticut
Storrs, CT 06268
Dear Madam or Sir:
I have known Sarah Holmes since she enrolled as a freshman at Marian three and a
half years ago. During that time I have come to know her very well as her academic adviser
and teacher in four classes. I would like to recommend her to you as a candidate for your
graduate program for the following reasons.
Sarah is a very intelligent and motivated young person. She earned a grade of
"A" in each of the three classes she has had from me (General Psychology,
Developmental Psychology, and Readings in Psychology) and she is performing equally well
in the class she is taking from me now (History and Systems of Psychology). She is the
type of student who is a pleasure to have in class. It is obvious that she is prepared and
ready to participate when she walks through the door, and she retains the same eager
attitude and zest until the end of the class. I want to emphasize the word eager;
Sarah enjoys learning and cannot seem to get enough of it. This extremely positive
attitude will serve her well in graduate school and will motivate her to continue learning
throughout her career as a professional psychologist.
She is not only an enthusiastic student, but also a very skillful one. I am
including a copy of the syllabus from my Readings in Psychology class (our senior capstone
class) so that you can know the skills (e.g., critical thinking, computer literacy,
library search, and oral and written communication) that she acquired during her first
three undergraduate years and mastered as a senior. We have found that this course
provides an excellent preparation for the rigors of graduate school. Anyone who earns an
"A" in this class--as Sarah did--is ready for graduate school.
Sarah is an absolutely avid researcher. She is currently involved in two simultaneous
research projects, one with me and the other with one of my part-time faculty who holds a
full-time position in the Department of Psychiatric Research at the Indiana University
Medical School. Both are major projects with potentially significant and publishable
results. One deals with the effects of in-house "jobs" on the cognitive status
of nursing home residents and the other with the construction of an objective test
instrument to measure the intellectual level of college students (according to William
Perry's model). Sarah has demonstrated that she can perform these projects in an
independent and responsible manner with a minimum of supervision. She is careful to
understand the expectations of her research supervisor and then carries out the details of
the project in a completely dependable manner. She is precisely the type of student
I want as a research assistant.
In conclusion, I recommend Sarah to you very highly as a candidate for admission to
your graduate program. She is exactly the type of undergraduate I would admit to a
graduate program of your type if I was in the position to do so.
Sincerely,
Drew C. Appleby, Ph.D.
Professor and Chairman |